短文改錯真題訓練（08）

When I first learned to write in English, I ran into many        76. ______

difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought        77. ______

in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English.              78. ______

My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her           79. ______

advice and should put down 100 words or so each day.           80. ______

Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was              81. ______

learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote        82. ______

a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it                   83. ______

very much and reads it to the class. All said the story was        84. ______

a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me.   85. ______

答案和解析：

本文講述了學習用英語寫作的經歷。

76. 正確。

77. 去掉in。was后面是一個以that引導的賓語從句, in是多余的。

78. anything改為everything。anything意為“任何事”，與句意不符。everything意為“所有的事”，符合句意。

79. my改為a。

80. 去掉should。put 和followed是平行結構，作并列謂語。

81. talk改為talking。enjoy后面要求接動名詞作賓語。

82. me 改為myself。express oneself為一固定結構，意為“表明意思、意見，表達思想”。

83. showed 后加it。showed在此作及物動詞，后面缺少賓語。 

84. reads 改為read。liked和read為平行結構，是并列謂語。

85. word 改為words。Their words在此表示“他們的話”之意。