短文改錯真題訓練（07）

Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei

Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it’s famous                  76. ______

mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather           77. ______

was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of                      78. ______

the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we             79. ______

climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples              80. ______

and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture              81.______

since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly.        82. ______

Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top        83. ______

of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was      84. ______

good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my                  85. ______

head touched the pillow.

答案和解析：

本文記述了游覽峨眉山的情況。

76. 在famous前加a，注意mountain是單數可數名詞。

77. 正確。

78. we 前加when，時間狀語從句缺少連詞引導。

79. them 改為us。短文為第一人稱。

80. visiting 改為visited。fed, visited, told 為并列謂語。

81. picture 要用復數形式pictures。

82. passes 改為passed，整個文章基本時態為一般過去時。

83. 去掉down。

84. and 改為but。因為此處意義發生轉折。

85. 去掉at。the moment在此用作連詞，相當于 as soon as。